Evaluation of first task

In my first lesson of media studies, i produced a story board with a peer for a genre of our choice. We were given a story line which we had to add to, to make it the genre we had chosen, ours had fallen under drama. I have posted the story board underneath(it is of a drunk man who fails to notice a family having a picnic). Once we had created the story board, we presented our ideas to the rest of the class and later went onto producing a same video clip using the images from the story board. In this same video clip, i added music to shot 3 which suited the picture but unfortunately did not get to complete the video so if i had more time, i would shorten each of my shots because i felt they were too long as well as adding background music throughout the whole video clip.